Capital Ideas

As I kick off a new series of grammar and punctuation articles to kick off the new year, I figured we might as well start at the top. Based on a suggestion on Twitter from Tami, aka @tami_moore, I’m going to tackle capitalization: when, how, and where.

The Rules

There are some conventions to be followed when using capitals. As far as I can tell, there are no differences between American and British usage; however, if any of my non-American readers are aware of any, please let me know. One thing to keep in mind is that for all the rules below, in general I’m talking about initial capital letters; i.e., the first letter in a word. If I address ALL CAPS, I’ll make that quite explicit.

1. Capitalize the first word in a sentence.

2. Capitalize proper nouns. “Proper nouns” include names of people (Steve, Kestrel) and places (Rapid City, England, Mount Rushmore).

  • Capitalize titles when used as a form of address or part of a name. Senator Thune, Father O’Malley, Pastor Jones, but “the senator” or “the pastor.”
  • Capitalize full forms of university degrees. This is a subset of the previous rule. Bachelor of Arts or Master of Science, but “bachelor’s degree” or “master’s degree”

3. Capitalize the “key words” in a title. Or not. This is a matter of style, and as such, is somewhat open to interpretation. I put this as a “rule” because the question will come up (in fact, it did, from Krizzlybear and @JustAnna), so I want to address this when we talk about specifics below.

4. Capitalize other stuff as appropriate. Such as abbreviations. But not all of them.

Getting Down to Cases

(See what I did there?)

Capitalize the first word in a sentence.

The only people who get this wrong are lazy, or e.e. cummings (but he’s a poet, and poetry is a completely different species). If you break this rule, I’m going to assume you missed the shift key. (Caveat: If you get to be as famous as e.e. cummings, you, too, may do any thing you damn well please with regard to style. Until then, however, it’s probably best if you follow the rules. Such as they are.)

Nevertheless, there is a special case we should address: the first letter following a colon. In this case, the rule is quite simple: If what follows the colon forms a complete sentence, then capitalize the first word. Look closely at the preceding two sentences: Each of them has a colon. In the first, what follows the colon is, in effect, a sentence fragment, hence, no cap. In the second, the colon separates two complete sentences; thus, a capital is used to start the part following the colon.1 Incidentally, the only time you capitalize after a semicolon is if the word is a proper noun.

After a colon, capitalize the first letter only if the words form a complete sentence.

Capitalize proper nouns.

If the preceding rule was the first one we learned, this one was second. Or vice versa. About the only time names aren’t capitalized when they should be (which is always) is the result of a typo. Again, though, there are some areas where people just aren’t sure whether to use a capital.

    Capitalize President Obama, but not "the president"

  • A title preceding a proper name requires a capital: Senator Thune, Queen Elizabeth II, Mayor Bloomberg. However, if you’re discussing the senator, the queen, or the mayor, lowercase is the way to go.2, 3
  • The formal names of university or college degrees are capitalized, such as Master of Science or Doctor of Philosophy. But don’t capitalize master’s degree in history or bachelor’s in political science. And then there is my graduate degree, properly called Master of Business Administration. Yeah, I agree: “MBA” is so much easier.
  • The Internet and the Web are places, just as the Matrix is. Caps, please!

  • A few specific cases: The Internet is a “great big place” but it’s still a place, so capitalize it. Similarly, the Web is a shortened alternative, so if you’re using it to refer to the Internet, capitalize it as well. However, “website” can refer to any of millions of places on the Web, so it’s a nonspecific, uncapitalized noun.4
  • And finally, Earth, Moon and Sun. Or are they the earth, the moon, and the sun? The dirt you plant flowers in is earth, or contains earth, which is a generic term for ground. When discussing our home planet, however, things get a bit more confusing. If you’re planning a trip from Earth (or the Earth) to Mars, Earth is almost always seen capitalized. But if you’re talking about earth’s escape velocity, you’ll see the word capitalized sometimes, and sometimes not. My personal preference is to capitalize Earth when I’m referring to the planet, without the preceding “the.” And to be consistent, our Sun and our Moon (but not the sun or the moon) should be capitalized, but that’s even less common. (And why is it “the earth”? We don’t talk about “the Saturn” or “the Mars.” The answer of course, is that “earth” is a synonym for “world.”) Isn’t English wonderful?

Capitalize “key words” in a title.

Hoo boy…this is probably the area where the most questions arise. Each time I asked friends if they had questions about capitalization (and in Tami’s original tweet suggesting this topic), this question was asked. As I stated at the top, determining how to capitalize titles is a stylistic decision. Grammar Girl has a good, short podcast on the topic. The extremes, of course, are to treat a title as a sentence and capitalize only the first letter, to capitalizing the first letter of each word, to CAPITALIZING EVERY LETTER IN THE TITLE. That last may be fine for the cover of a book, but it’s a bit much for day-to-day writing, methinks.

For Titles of Creative Works, Pick a Style and Stick With It

So, let’s address the middle case, and the exceptions to this “rule.” Most of us were probably taught in school to capitalize all the words in a title except articles (a, an, the) and the prepositions “for” and “of.” The exceptions to that, however, are when such words are the first or last words of the title. According to writers.com tips for title capitalization:

The U.S. Government Printing Office Style Manual offers one easy style: "Capitalize all words in titles of publications and documents, except a, an, the, at, by, for, in, of, on, to, up, and, as, but, it, or, and nor."

That’s good enough for me!

But what about subtitles? What about subordinate elements such as sections, paragraphs, chapters, and the like? You can apply the same rules as for main titles (such as they are), or you can use a different style entirely. For example, for my blog (at least from this point forward) I intend to use the GPO style for article titles. But subsections may (and as is the case in this article) get an entirely different treatment. The most important thing to remember is to be consistent within each type of title in a given document. Not that anyone will break your fingers if you aren’t, but it will certainly give your work a more polished and professional appearance if you do maintain that consistency.

Capitalize other stuff as appropriate.

That’s nice and specific, isn’t it? Let’s look at abbreviations, as an example. Generally speaking (and please note the emphasis as connoted by the italics), if something is capitalized when written out, its abbreviation is similarly capitalized. If it’s not normally capitalized, don’t capitalize the abbreviation.

  • a.m. and p.m. These are abbreviations for ante meridiem and post meridiem, Latin terms for before and after noon, respectively. They are not capitalized.5 Thus, 8:00 A.M. (or 8:00 AM) is incorrect. (So, too, is 8:00 am.) Incidentally (and I’m going to hate myself later for putting this here, because I won’t be able to find it later), noon and midnight are not capitalized unless they are the first word of a sentence. *sigh* And as long as we’re on the topic, try to avoid 12:00 a.m. or 12:00 p.m. Instead, use midnight and noon, respectively.6 Look at that: A whole post compressed into one paragraph and two footnotes. The things I do for you, dear readers!
  • State abbreviations. In the United States (U.S. or US; I much prefer the former, but USA over U.S.A. Once again, stylistic convention, but be consistent!), there are almost as many ways to abbreviate state names as there are states.

    Reserve post office abbreviations for envelopes; use 3-5 letter state abbreviations elsewhere, if you must abbreviate.

    • Take my home state of California, for instance: Cal., Calif., or, per the U.S. Postal Service, CA. N.B.: “Cali” is not, never has been, and never will be an acceptable shortening of the name of the state of California.7 Ahem…where was I? Oh, yes….
    • The two-letter postal abbreviations for states (and Canadian provinces) have both letters capitalized; e.g., AB (Alberta), BC (British Columbia), CA (California). Postal abbreviations do not have periods at the end; however, it might be acceptable to abbreviate some states such as Ca. or Co. (Of course, an abbreviation for Canada is Ca. and for county, Co. So why confuse matters?)
    • Finally, while SD is the postal abbreviation for South Dakota, S.D. is perfectly acceptable as well (similarly, N.C., N.D., S.C., R.I., etc.). Generally, postal abbreviations should be reserved for envelopes; other writing should use more conventional abbreviations, if you must abbreviate.
  • Multi-word abbreviations. Up above, I mentioned a.m. and p.m., and alluded to U.S. vs. US. Note there is no space after the periods in an abbreviation. This of course begs the question, are periods required in abbreviations? Short answer: It depends. Once again, it’s a stylistic choice. The New York Times, for example, abbreviates National Football League as N.F.L., which, when I read it, sounds like “enn…eff…ell.” “NFL,” on the other hand, which is how it’s abbreviated everywhere else that I know of, sounds like “eneffell.” Similarly, to me, U.S.A. and USA sound like “You. Ess. Ay.” and “YouEssAy,” respectively. But that’s just me. Once again, take your pick, but be consistent. Consistency counts!

Are we done yet?

I hope so, but I doubt it. I’m sure I’ve left out everything you’ve wondered about capitalization, and included only those items that make you go, “Well, DUH!” Ohh…see? What about CAPS FOR EMPHASIS? I realize that in text chat, this is a simple convention to observe. But in serious (or even not-so-serious) writing, realize we live in the age of computers: It’s not that hard to hit Control-I (or Command-I, Mac users) to italicize for emphasis.8

If there are other areas of capitalization I omitted, or if you want to take issue with my position on any of these, let’s discuss in the comments!

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Notes:
  1. No doubt I’ll use this same paragraph when I talk about colons and semicolons in a future article.
  2. In the UK, is it preferred to capitalize “Queen” when speaking specifically about Queen Elizabeth? Someone enlighten me, please.
  3. Stylistically, some writers prefer to capitalize “the President” when speaking specifically about the president of the United States; however, it’s notable that almost every noun in the U.S. Constitution is capitalized, in the custom of the time it was originally penned. On the other hand, it can be argued the form in the Constitution is the full formal title of the office.
  4. Reference: http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/Capitalizing-Proper-Nouns.aspx
  5. Actually, you can capitalize them, without periods, if you use small capitals. If you can do that faster than typing “a.m.” or “p.m.” though, more power to you!
  6. Reference: http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/daylight-saving-time.aspx
  7. On the other hand, “Frisco” is perfectly acceptable as a substitute for “San Francisco,” but only if you live, or have lived, in Southern California, and preferably in the cities of Los Angeles or San Diego, or Orange County.
  8. I’m using Windows Live Writer on my Mac, so I have to use Ctrl-I, and it’s hard to get back into that habit, believe me!
13 Conversations about Capital Ideas
  1. Tami
    January 5, 2010 | 17:49

    *british voice* MMmyes, capital post!

    Or is that ‘capitol’?

    I have a case that you are missing, good sir, and I think of it only because it recently came up in my editing.

    Fantasy.

    (this is the part where you cringe, I know, I know)

    Human is not capitalized. American IS capitalized, because it’s a specific type of human, yes? (Or Aurelan, in the case of my manuscript).

    However, Halar (which is a not-human humanoid species in my fantasy novel) is capitalized because it is specific.

    Or maybe it shouldn’t be?

    What about Magic?

    In my novel, singing is a way of doing magic. Should Song be capitalized when used in that context? What about Prayersong, a specific type of magical song?

    Aside from the obvious “pick a capitalization style and STICK with it” have you any capitalization advice for the fantasy writer, my good sir?
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    • Kestrel   Twitter:
      January 5, 2010 | 18:09

      You, madam, fall squarely into the category of “brat.” :)

      In the course of normal writing, “human” isn’t capitalized, but “Caucasian” and “Mongoloid” (as races) are. Thus, the race of beings known as Halar would be capitalized. American is capitalized because it’s a nationality, as are Norwegian, Spanish, and Israeli.

      In fantasy (remind me to address this offshoot in all future articles so I don’t have to do lengthy commentary after the fact *grin*), yes, you must pick a style and stick with it. But that’s where your friendly copyeditor is going to prove invaluable, because she (e.g., Deanna Hoak) or he (I’m sure there are male copyeditors out there) will make sure you establish the conventions for your novel and stick to them.

      In reading Deanna’s commentaries, it seems some editors go one way, some go another. Same with copyeditors. This is one of those areas where the author and the house will probably have some discussions that may or may not include the copyeditor. Eventually, decisions will be made, communicated to relevant parties, and editing will continue.

      In the case of Song of Binding, as a reader, it would make sense to me, in your world as I perceive it (based solely on your comment) that Henrietta’s (made-up name, for any who are curious) Song would be capitalized, if it’s that personal. On the other hand, if we’re talking about many different songs, in the same way we’d talk about spells, it seems to me lowercase would be appropriate.

      So, Magic Missiles is capitalized; similarly, I imagine Song of Restoration would be as well.

      In fact, since I’m referring to Deanna, let me refer you to one of her writings:

      Making a science fiction or fantasy novel accessible–trying to see through the author’s eyes to what he or she wants to accomplish–frequently means not following the rules. Take titles of nobility, for instance. In regular fiction, you have kings and queens and presidents–there’s nothing complex about it, and no reason to have those terms capitalized when they appear all by themselves. In fantasy, however, you frequently have much more unusual titles that might not be clear to the reader as such if the rules are followed. In Charlie Finlay’s book The Prodigal Troll, for instance, the head of the trolls is called the First. Had I elected to “correctly” lowercase that term when it occurred alone, I would have damaged the readability of the text; I chose to leave his titles capitalized instead. It made sense. (http://bit.ly/7OetqB)

      • Tami
        January 6, 2010 | 06:46

        Thhhhhbbbbt. If I didn’t know you love it, I wouldn’t ask. <3

        Thanks! That follows with what we were assuming (including leaving wiggle room for an editor to go "no…no, I don't think Prayersong should be capitalized. Fix it everywhere."

        • Kestrel   Twitter:
          January 6, 2010 | 09:05

          Absolutely, and I’m glad you brought it up! I do need to remember who I’m writing for, and why. “Generally speaking” doesn’t always cut it when I really mean, “Generally speaking, in speculative fiction…” for example.

          However: Think of hymns. The word “hymn” isn’t capitalized, but the names of hymns (“Ave Maria,” “Faith of our Fathers,” etc.) are. So while “song” may not warrant a capital in every case in Song of Binding, “Prayersong” may well do so–unless, say, it’s a type of Song. ;) But again, these are the things that authors and editors fight over.

          • Tami
            January 6, 2010 | 09:08

            It is a specific song (or Song), if that helps. Prayersong is the same melody when sung by anyone, just as Truthsong is. (and when it is NOT the same is one of the plot twists, so we’ll just whisk past that particular detail, eh?)
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  2. TJ
    January 5, 2010 | 18:36

    I am an unapologetic caps for emphasis person. I write my blog like I speak, and I speak in all caps. Always glad to hand out my cell number to anyone who may doubt the veracity of this claim. There’s just no other way for me. Occasionally I will italicize, but I always come back to the caps. And I will never change!
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    • Kestrel   Twitter:
      January 6, 2010 | 00:14

      But TJ, in your blog, on Twitter, and in other IM clients, caps are not only acceptable, but in most cases easier. However, when writing for (paid) publication, editors generally prefer italics. Obviously, there are exceptions, and some authors use both, to convey degrees of emphasis: shouting, for example, which usually is better transmitted through caps than italics.

      Oh, and I’ve heard and seen you speak, TJ: I know you speak in ALL CAPS. ;)

    • Tami
      January 6, 2010 | 06:48

      In addition to Kestrel’s reply, I think it’s worth noting that your capitalization use makes your blog posts MORE readable, because they convey personality, meaning, and fervor.

      Not everyone is as adept in their capitalization use. Some folks should have their capslock key removed from their keyboard and hidden. XD
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      • Kestrel   Twitter:
        January 6, 2010 | 09:00

        That’s a great point, Tami, and I was thinking along those lines when I replied. Wish I’d been as eloquent about it as you were. :) I have an excuse though: It was after midnight, and I’d just finished a one-hour (at least) Heroic Oculus run. ugh.

  3. Elenaltarien   Twitter:
    January 5, 2010 | 22:49

    Some additional ones that I didn’t see mentioned.
    *names of specific courses (such as Math 101)
    *direction when used to refer to a specific geographical region. Example: “the South” to refer to the Southern USA, but not “I live on the south side of the city”

    Additionally, my source book says that if one sentence follows the colon, then no capitals should be used. If two or more sentences follow a colon, then you should capitalize the first letter after the colon.

    Source: The Blue Book of Grammar and Punctuation by Jane Strauss (10th edition)

    This is a very helpful article. I found out some things that are not covered in my resources. As you continue your series on grammar, I hope you will address the different between i.e. and e.g. Far too often I see those used improperly. I was glad to see i.e. put to correct use in your article!

    And no, I didn’t edit this comment for correct grammar. I probably have mistakes all over the place. :p
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    • Kestrel   Twitter:
      January 6, 2010 | 00:20

      El, those are good points; I knew I’d miss some things. :) Consider Math 101 as a title, and apply the rules accordingly. And yes, geographical distinctions are common, and can also be confusing. For example, we talk about the southern United States, but the South of France is a common usage.

      I’d never heard of that usage for post-colon punctuation. It’s certainly an interesting variation. I’ll check and see what other sources I can find on this topic as well.

      I should have mentioned that I am generally approaching these articles as an editor of fiction, rather than business or other formal (textbook) writing. So you won’t see me cite the AP Stylebook, or the Chicago Manual of Style (which is from the University of Chicago, not the Chicago Tribune, for the curious).

      Oh…and I didn’t see any glaring grammatical errors in your comment. ;) As we shall see as we go on, most of the rules are rather flexible, and if I don’t cover some of that flexibility myself, I’ll certainly link to some of those discussions.

  4. Trizophenie
    January 6, 2010 | 03:11

    Reading this post of yours, Kes, makes me somehow glad that over here in Germany, we just capitalize almost everything (basically your rules, but add all nouns to them) which makes it much easier to not miss capital letters.

    • Kestrel   Twitter:
      January 6, 2010 | 08:58

      Yeah, but it really screws up some native English speakers when they learn German: They then go back to English and start applying the German rule! *grin*